For this week’s assignment to analyze a Wikipedia article, I chose my hometown Charlottesville, Virginia—which is also apparently hometown to the world’s worst motto, “a great place to live for all of our citizens.” [The motto wasn’t cited and a Google search only produced this equally bad rendition.]
Before reading the article, I wrote down some of the points I would expect to be touched on in a decent citizen write-up of the town. These included significant historical landmarks in the area such as TJ’s Monticello, Monroe’s Ash Lawn, and the Rotunda; the University of Virginia; the unique political make-up of the town—i.e. a liberal haven within a conservative state; the contentious civil rights history of Charlottesville public schools; and maybe some puff stats like it having the most restaurants per capita (or at least that’s what we all say) and that it is ranked the best place to live in the nation.
Upon reading the article, I thought it captured a lot of facts about Charlottesville but was lacking in narrative and poorly organized. For example, there is a pretty extensive section on Charlottesville’s climate with a chart of the average temperatures every month, but there was no discussion about the political leanings of the area. Charlottesville plays a unique role along with Northern Virginia and Roanoke as one of the three main Democratic engines in the state.
The article has a pretty elaborate “History” section that elaborates on Jefferson, Monroe, and Madison’s roots in the area, the origins of the Lewis and Clark expedition, and the period of massive resistance in 1958 when Charlottesville shut down its public school system rather than integrate. However, the existence of the Astronomy Observatory and a list of major employers are also tacked onto the end of this section rather inexplicably. Other sections are choppy with little logical flow.
I noticed a few omissions in the data. WUVA 92.7 KISS FM is left off an otherwise exhaustive list of radio stations (odd because it is certainly one of the most popular stations in the area.) Friday’s After Five, a weekly concert on the Downtown Mall that attracts thousands of people, didn’t make the “Attractions and Culture” section.
Sourcing seems fair enough, but is limited to online sources. The Hook, a local newspaper, has the largest share of citations, though it is not the most widely circulated newspaper.
Charlottesville has a complex relationship with Albemarle County. While it is an independent city with an independent City Council and School Board, the city is embedded within the county and thus the two have many shared attractions and functions. The article mentions this relationship but is inconsistent with its application. For example, the list of the largest employers only pulls from those physically located within the city limits, while there are much larger ones a mile or two out that employ vast amounts of city residents. Conversely, the list of notable residents includes Sissy Spacek and John Grisham, who both live outside city limits.
The graphics on the site are decent except for a random map titled Census Map that provides no useful information apart from the location of several vein-like creeks that I can only imagine depict the Rivanna Watershed. If so, it should be re-titled.
My favorite part of the article was the discussion page—especially fun because I recognized some of the contributors. Here’s where I found interesting commentary on the birthplace of Meriwether Lewis, discussion about prejudiced comments that had been removed, and a discussion of who should and should not make the “Notable Persons” list.
I did learn a few things from Charlottesville’s Wikipedia page and I love its collaborative nature. But perhaps it’s expecting too much to hope to see a entry worthy of a traditional publishing house.

